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  办大型体育赛事的利弊,是雅思写作话题之一。虽然出现频率不高,但是越“冷”、“偏门”,越要专门准备,才不至于在考场上措手不及。机考考生备考尤其要注意这一点。并进行结构分析和词汇整理,供大家学习参考。
  Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive imPACt on a country.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowLEDge or experience. Write at least 250 words. 下划线为组长标记的常用表达,斜体为话题相关表达。 There is fiercecomPETition between nations to host major international sports events like the World Cup or Olympics as it is a unique opportunity to boost the national reputation of the host nation. In spite of its undeniable benefits, I believe that the costs are too great and therefore governments should prioritiseother key issues to better benefit their citizens.一句改述题目,第二句给出个人观点并简要论述原因。在开头段给出个人观点有助于“让一个清晰的立场贯穿全文”。
   On the one hand, becoming a host nation for globalevents such as the World Cup or the Olympics brings a number of economic and infrastructural benefits. During these events, there is an influx of tourists from all over the world who need places to stay, restaurants to eat in and traditional products to purchase. The efforts made to cater to these tourists will remain long after they have gone. The cost of renovating a hotel might pay for itself during the event and then begin turning a large profit in later years. The other main area of development is related to the rapid expansion of quality infrastructure. Nations will be forced to invest in new sports facilities like swimming pools and stadiums as well as make renovations to pre-existing infrastructure like roads and airports. For example, China used the Beijing Olympics as an opportunity to modernise old buildings and roads.一、句预告全段,为什么办这类赛事有帮助。第二句解释办赛事带来的旅游业发展如何对东道主国家有好处。第三句提出了分论点,旅游业发展对东道国有长期影响。第四句举例说明这种长期影响的好处。第五句继续拓展中心句,描述这类赛事如何促进东道国基础设施建设。第六句具体说明哪些具体设施会得到改善。第七句简单举例。
  On the other hand, these competitions use up tremendous resources from the host nation for a temporary competition. To ensure the success of these prestigious events, governments must waste a large percentage of the nation budget in the years leading up to the competition, oftentimes in the billions of dollars. The newly constructed facilities usually fall into disuse after each tournament. A salient example of this is Brazil as many of the swimming pools and sports facilities that were used in the 2014 Olympics are currently abandoned and becoming decrepit. Meanwhile, there are other pressing issues that have been festering including the need for new schools for underprivileged students and quality healthcare for the elderly population. If the government had prioritised these issues the country would be in a better position and its citizens would have a higher standard of living.一句预告全段,为什么办这类赛事是浪费资源。第二句描述了一个事实,东道国需要花很多钱办赛。第三句提出为赛事兴建的设施可能赛后就不用了。第四句具体举了巴西的例子。第五句是例子的延伸,指出巴西还有更重要的事务需要投入。第六句论述投入优先事务的好处,形成完整的论述链条。
  To summarize, due to the exorbitant costs, I am of the belief that the government should not allocate such a large percentageof its financial resources to hosting global events with negligiblelong-term impact. Instead these events should be hosted in the same countries year after year so that the new infrastructure pays for itself over time.一句总结个人观点即原因。第二句增加了额外的细节和一个可能的解决办法。
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  组长提示:G友们可能注意到了,这篇文章的段落顺序,并不是按照题目中观点出现的顺序,先说坏处再说好处,而是掉换了一下。这是因为作者更倾向于“有坏处”,所以,先写好处,再写坏处,接着明确自己观点,就很顺畅。这种段落结构安排,大家可以学习并结合题目实际情况应用。


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