雅思四项中，听力和阅读属于客观题，得分按照答对的题目数量而定，两项的评分如下。这个评分标准传递给我们的信号就是：当你拥有雅思阅读 /雅思听力 7.5分的实力以后，你在做题时要再细心再细心些，（假设你是对34道题，得分7.5）那么如果你再多对一道题，你就是得分8分；在这个8分基础上，你再多对2题，就是8.5分。也就是说， 听力和阅读要加1分的跨越比口语和写作直接得很多，私认为，也简单得很多。 我在机构主要教授阅读和写作科目，今天就来和大家分享下：雅思写作部分中的评分标准吧。
　　首先，众所周知，作文的评分标准共4项。 任务回应 （大作文为：task response，小作文为 task achievement ） 连贯与衔接（coherence and cohesion） 词汇 （lexical resource） 语法 （grammar range and accuracy）鉴于大家在写作方面常见的目标分是： 6分～7分，所以我们先上标准的雅思写作的6分和7分，大家可以在四项评分标准中地观察一下它们的区别。 空谈的评分标准就像是说大话一样，接下来，我们拿一篇剑桥真题里面的范文来看下，这篇考官作文批改来源于C12Test4。 题目是： In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?下面这是考生写的文章：
　　 首先：Task Response 文章分析： position： I think that the cause of these problems are due to unhealthy lifestyle and the lack of exercise Causes ： Nowadays, people are getting more and more lazy I think that the main cause is the lack of exercise Measures： The one and only solution to this is exercise People should also balance their diet
　　Examiner' s comments:
　　This script answers both parts of the task and presents a clear opinion on the issues. There are relevant main ideas，although the supporting examples are sometimes less appropriate. 特别提醒：task response是评分标准的重中之重，是否有充分地回应写作任务是重要的，如果离题了，那么即使有一些高级的长难句和高级词汇，也是无用功。
　　 第二：Coherence and Cohesion 文章分析： I think that the main cause is the lack of exercise. As you grow older, your metabolism rate drops. Even if you are eating the same amount as before, you will still gain weight. The one and only solution to this is exercise. The recommended exercise per day is at least 30 minutes of brisk walking.
　　 Examiner' s comment： The answer is organized with some good use of connectives and time-markers giving an overall progression to the argument. There are also mistakes however, and some lack of linking between sentences. Paragraphing is used, but is not always logical, and the concluding paragraph is confused. 考官说：and some lack of linking between sentences ，针对这一条，我们可以适当地使用一些连接词，可改进的revision版本参考如下： Revision: Para 2: One possible reason is that Para 3: Furthermore Para 4: A variety of measures should be affectively taken to tackle the problem
　　 第三：Lexical Resource 文章分析： 1. People are getting more and more lazy 2. The recommended exercise per day is… 3. This is healthy living for the body, heart and the soul
　　 Examiner' s comment： The range of vocabulary is the best feature of this script, and includes some good use of natural expressions and idiomatic language. There is some inappropriate use of a less formal style at times, but control is generally good. There are few word choices that are inaccurate, and errors in word form and spelling are only occasional. 针对于考官说的 less formal style at times, 可改进的revision版本参考如下： Revision: 1. People are becoming increasingly lazy 2. It is recommended that the daily exercise should be… 3. This is considered to be a healthy lifestyle, physically, emotionally, and even psychologically
　　 第四： Grammatical Range and Accuracy 文章分析： I think that the main cause is the lack of exercise. As you grow older, your metabolism rate drops. Even if you are eating the same amount as before, you will still gain weight.
　　 Examiner' s comment： A variety of sentence forms is used with accuracy and fluency, but there are a lot of short, simple sentences that reduce the range of complex structures. There are grammatical errors and omission but these are not frequent. 根据考官的批改there are a lot of short, simple sentences ，可改进的revision版本参考如下： Revision: A more important factor that contributes to this problem is the lack of physical exercise. Research in biology as well as medicine has proved that human metabolism slows down when they get older. Consequently, even if people ate the same amount as before, they might still gain weight.