雅思考官评分标准中末尾一项 GRA ( grammatical range and accuracy ) ,明确考察的是学生写英语句子多样性和准确性的能力,即测试考生简单句和复杂句的综合运用能力。接下来跟小编一起来看看吧。
而考生也知道句式表达要多样性,但很难参透具体如何操作才能让自己的句子丰富多样,结果是普遍句式比较单一,写到复杂结构时往往就是堆砌各种从句,似乎除了从句再无其它复杂结构可写。事实上,剑桥考官的范文中,复杂句的数量寥寥可数,很多时候都是把简单句进行了华丽的包装,今天就来看看考官喜欢的 " 高分句型 " 是什么样的,和你想象的是不是有差距 !
1. 状语前置
所谓状语前置就是把状语 ( 副词,介词短语,分词,不定式 ) 放到句首。考官会频繁使用这种语法结构,而很多考生却没有意识,这种句式通过一堆长句子中出现一个小短语,可以让句子产生长短结合的紧凑感,实例如下:
1 )
Unfortunately, professionals from other fields who make a much greater contribution to human society, are paid so much less that it is hard to disagree with the statement.
2 )
Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills.
3 )
Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be most important for achieving happiness.
4 )
As a result of media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities.
5 )
With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.
2. 句中插入短语
和状语前置类似,长句子中间插入一个小短语,可以让句子读起来更轻松灵活。考官实例如下:
This will affect the job market, which, after all, is a key target in any economic plan.
Sports stars and pop stars, for example, are soon replaced by the neat younger, more energetic generation.
So overall, I believe that, attending schools from a young age is good for most children.
Universities, when it is functioning well, should offer both theoretical knowledge as well as professional training
3. 倒装句这种语法现象考生都学过,但往往在作文中忘记或没有意识使用。先看两个例子:
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Parents should spend time on their children. They should also communicate with them.
2 )
We can never lose sight of the significance of education.
这两个句子没有任何错误,但都很单调平淡,如果使用倒装,效果就不一样了。一句可以用 not only t also 句型来改写成倒装句:Not only should parents spent time on their children, they are also advised to interact with them.
第二句可以否定词提前,强调突出 " 不可忽视 "。
On no account/by no means/ in no way/never can we lose sight of the significance of education.
考官范文中的倒装例子并不多,主要体现在以下几种情况中:only in this way can this problem be effectively solved.
We can see that not only are there very large differences between these economies-s, but that these gaps are widening.
Strange as it may seem, parents ’ attention sometimes hinders students ’ academic development.
Equally important to success in learning a foreign language is constant attention to details.
考生在平时的语言积累和写作练习中,可以多模仿这几种固定句式,在文章中穿插 1-2 句倒装句。
看到这里,烤鸭们不难发现,考官范文以及剑桥书后的高分范文里,各种复杂句式并不是高分的标准,对文章的整体把握,合理运用各种句型,保证文章的逻辑以及流畅性才是主要的。当然语法结构正确也是必不可少的评分标准之一 !