下面小编跟大家一起了解雅思写作提分技巧分享，希望对大家的学习有所帮助。
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　　文章写得行云流水
　　先给大家上一个纯净版的范文，大家试试一边读，一边脑内复原流程图。ps，我用的这个扫描版所有的内容截图都是歪的，大家看在这书有内涵的面子上，多多包涵。
　　为了让大家感觉到文章和文章的差别。请阅读下面的流程图，依旧一边读文章一边画流程图。
　　The flow chart gives detailed information about the life cycle of the silkworm .
　　The life cycle of a silkworm starts fromone of the many eggslaidby a mothon mulberry leaves. It takes 10 days for the eggs tohatchinto silkwormlarvae, which gradually grow bigger bynibblingthe mulberry leaves. This growing process lasts for 4-6 weeks, before the larvae start to produce silk threads and form cocoons thatwrap themselves inside. The cocoons will be completed in 3-8 days, and an adult moth will break out from each cocoon after 16 days, starting a new life cycle of the silkworm.