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　　照顾动物是父母让孩子懂得责任的好方式Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way for parents to teach their children about responsibility is to have them care for an animal.
　　你同意还是不同意以下说法？父母教育孩子负责任的好方法是让他们照顾动物。
　　Personally I highly doubt that caring for an animal has anything to do with “responsibility”. Or at least I hardly believe it is the “best way” for parents to do it.
　　就我个人而言，我非常怀疑照顾动物与“责任”有任何关系。或者至少我几乎不相信这是父母好的方式。
　　To be responsible is to do what one has promised. Responsibility definitely are more related with a rational decision before action and a strong mind of carrying out a schedule and of keeping every disturbance which may turn a plan involving with other people into invalidity than “caring” for a lovely small piece of creature.
　　负责任就是履行承诺。责任肯定与行动前的理性决定、执行时间表的坚强意志以及保持每一个可能使与他人有关的计划无效的干扰有关，而不是“关心”一个可爱的小生物。
　　There are way too many methods of teaching children how to be reponsible. I would prefer negative stimulus in the early education. Kids need a clear line which they could never cross. When kids are told and agree not to speak loudly in public area such a bookstore or a hospital, they should also be informed the result they would face if they broke their words. It will definitely set up a protocol for them to follow in their later life.
　　有太多的方法教孩子如何负责。我更喜欢早期教育中的消极刺激。孩子们需要一条永远不能越过的清晰的线。当孩子们被告知并同意不要在公共场所大声说话时，比如书店或医院，他们也应该被告知如果他们失言将面临的后果。它肯定会为他们的晚年制定一个协议。
　　I also believe that telling stories of heroes to children is a better way. Stories might be a bit exaggerated or extorted, but they certainly would set up a sense of discipline, bravery and responsibility. When I was little, my father read a story to me. It is about historians’ spirit. So in ancient time, literally three thousand years ago, historian was considered a noble job. Historians’ duty was to record what was happening in the court and the job was hereditary. So the tyrant of Qi State murdered the old king and threatened the royal historians not to record the misdeed. Otherwise he would
　　我也相信向孩子们讲述英雄故事是一种更好的方式。故事可能有点夸张或敲诈，但它们肯定会建立起一种纪律感、勇气和责任感。我小时候，父亲给我读了一个故事。这与历史学家的精神有关。所以在古代，确切地说是三千年前，历史学家被认为是一个高尚的工作。历史学家的职责是记录法庭上发生的事情，而这项工作是世袭的。因此，齐国的暴君杀害了老国王，并威胁皇家历史学家不要记录这些罪行。否则他会的
　　 重点词汇disagree with不同意，不一致，不适合
　　care for照顾;关心;喜欢
　　at least至少，不少于;至少，不济;至少，起码;起码，不管怎样
　　rational decision理性的决定
　　other people别人；他人；物；旁人
　　There are有;可数名词的复数形式;许多重要事情要谈