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  下面小编跟大家一起了解雅思大作文高分范文,希望对大家的学习有所帮助。
   题目 More and more parents are allowing their

  下面小编跟大家一起了解雅思大作文高分范文,希望对大家的学习有所帮助。
   题目 More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?本文出自于教育科技类型的文章,此类文章难度系数不大,同往年相比,此类型的文章在近几年基本是每年必出的话题,而且此题在分析问题的角度更加细致化,重点在于家长允许孩子们玩电脑或平板电脑所带来的好处是否大于它的缺点。这种科技类型的文章平时上课的时候经常提及,论证方法采取今昔对比论证(过去 VS 现在)或反面对比论证(玩电脑的孩子 VS 不玩电脑的孩子)较容易展开。
  诸如下文,本篇文章在语言上没有任何出入,语法上没有错误,措辞和用句也没有失分点,但是从文章整体来看非满分范文,为7分范文,希望大家从中可以有的放矢地去学习好用的句型与句式。
   范文With the high speed development of modern technology, various equipment have been adopted in all walks of life, especially in teaching field. These days, increasing number of parents encourage their children to play computers and tablets in order to gain personal skills. In my opinion, more insights should be taken in.
  Since children are lack of self-control to indulge in virtual world, they are vulnerable to negative influence. In the past, the contents by which children would touch were selected by parents or teachers. Instead now, due to the advanced communication tools based on computers and tablets, adolescents are surrounded by uncountable and questionable information, say, pornography and violence. As a result, teenagers are easily lost themselves in information explosion.
  Furthermore, young children are in critical time of physical development, which means they can be negatively affected by long time spent on computers and tablets. Most computer screens give off radiation, the strain from staring over long period of time can cause harm to them vision. In addition, no matter what those children are using for, sitting in desk too much time can also contribute to aches and pains, especially for neck and back.
  It is true that technology change the way how students learn. Students who live in remote areas can attend a school or a class far away to learn skills. Also, teenagers could use the web to communicate with their peers and professors as well as research a diversity of topics.
  So while parents advocate the use of computer equipment to learn, they ignore children's physical and psychological immaturity. For any field, the utilization of modern technology should be under severe consideration.

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